An Angelic Devil - Reviews

As he finished up he watched the sky slowly turn dark, enjoying it for a moment the peaceful noise of the night drawing near. The family calling it a day and going to their beds to rest, the father falling asleep almost instantly on the bed from being so tired, while Ziro continued to read his book next to candlelight while his family slept soundly asleep.

Yuuichi stopped Holding Rain and gently put her on the ground and says.

When he got home, he finally found out his father was jailed for multiple crimes he committed in Seoul. He had 5 life sentences, so that meant that he wasn't getting out until he was 175. Jungkook was relieved, however, he had learned that violence was a normal thing, however much people told him that violence was wrong, he was brought up in a violent setting and he became a sadist.

"All of you are ugly as fuck!"

A girl with delicate face, slender body, perfect balance of upper and lower body features. She had shiny long and smooth orange hair that reaches her back that tied into lower ponytail with blue ribbon. She has purple ripple eyes and normal eyebrows. The Yin Seal has emerged on the middle of forehead. She wore Sakura Pink Kimono Dress, Sakura Red Skirt and Black High Boots. Her appearance is 18 years old and 170 cm in height.

Well in my opinion it's pretty good. Not sure how valued my opinion is though?

everything is very good story is very interesting but you don't upload regularly

I really liked how you portrayed this new Aria. It's obvious she's going to have to fight with her previous self to gain everyone's trust...  And hopefully get back to her own world! It keeps me thinking on what's going to happen. Pretty good job!! Keep up the hard work, author!