Alpha Zachary - Reviews

Really?, i started reading this **** since your first chapter on the other story, i'll just take out both your stories from my library and never read something you write again.

"Where in the world am I!? What is this place!?"

​"Mister Toby," a quiet voice said from behind him said almost in a whisper

The other men had barely registered the fact that she had already broken through their group and ran off into the dunes. "She was able to best Gel and Sven… Yet she runs away without dealing with us?" The sailors seemed to have snapped out of their daze now for a few moments until suddenly the sands shifted beneath them followed by a loud thud.

Mentally, I traced the pattern of one my tats and felt it burn to life, a sensation similar to a bullet kicking a hole in my head.  I staggered, stumbled, but didn't go down.  After a moment, my vision cleared and I could breathe again.  With the defensive shield now around me, it would take a high level spell to do more than irritate me.  Already, the narcotic smoke in the air transformed to purifying sage.  

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

I almost felt bad for the enemy mobs. They were so outnumbered compared to the hordes of newbie players assaulting them. If any mobs managed to spawn in, they would immediately find themselves decimated by a party of five charging players.

it was because disciples can hunt beasts and get practical experience and they can sell demonic crystal if they want.

"Help? Ha ha ha, you're funny."

Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better

Emotional start! you a mommy gurl or mommy boy are you Author! Story is getting interesting from chapter to chapter! Keep writing...you are not allowed to slack off! I want more chapters! DO YOU UNDERSTAND! THIS IS AN ORDER! NOT A REQUEST!

i Like the First chapter it was funny ??