All Heavenly destiny reduced to ashes - Reviews

Elementary - Air : 68/68

from the other side caring voice came

...As always, Asta still couldn't use magic.

"Listen carefully, "BJ whispered. "I overheard the investigators, they said that a series of killing has happened in Block 24B. The deaths were gruesome; all of the internal organs of the victims went missing just like the cadaver found at the club."

Wow, what an incredible story! Incredible pacing, very intricate story with interesting characters! Very well structured with great punctuation and grammar, very easy to read. Can’t wait to read the next chapter as soon as it comes out.

Here we are back at Sarthak's novel.So... The latest few chapters have not been my cup of tea. By that, I mean that the whole "Lucifer" thing. Nonetheless, the next few chapters are a tad interesting.They expanded more on the lore and had development. Sarthak clearly likes his world building. Morgan's getting weirder, but at least Glen's there. I suggest the author add some moments of introspection. The more he writes, the somewhat better his skills become. That's all I'm gonna say for now.

A great book , the first 25 chapter hook me up, it has a lot of potential, great grammar, interesting characters design . Looking forward for more chapters.

It is 5 star. Why because it is written quite well for a 1st book. The story is not rushed as you can visual the events written on it. Kodus Author Sama. Add it to library.