Age of Adventure - Reviews

Great story. Amazing characters. Love to just read this in my spare time. I've read all the chapters for now and will continue to read because it's just that good. Thank you for make this and it has been a true adventure to read this.

Tactics and strategies of epic proportions. A good novel to follow for people who like kingdom building and thought-evoking philosophies.

Legend says that Aero's fate lies in the hands of Keikokumars as he is more proficient at scheming and plotting... *ugh storybuilding.

Please find an editor to improve the quality of the story. There are grammar mistakes and run-on sentences among others. Just find yourself a good strategist... *cough editor.

Read this novel years ago on royal road. Hope you update this as it was great but does need to be proof read. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXD

4 star for now ..will update later
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The jumping of past and present tense is a difficult adjustment to make as a reader.

First person narrative, but missing first person perspective.