After the Villainess’s Thoughts Were Exposed, She Became the Group’s Darling - Reviews

And we could all use a little change

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Mu Rong Ying replied with a snide laugh.

But the meteor men beg to differ

Good story but I feel like it has too much content in each chapter. Why not reduce the content and spread it to have more chapters ?

Ok so I'm making this review of your novel all because I've been curious as to what it was like, first of all your grammar it's not bad but its also not great for example in some lines where you should be using past tense words you use their present tense, and the way your wrote his "system" was too long, and to be fair I was like that too when I first started writing you can correct that by breaking down his system instead of putting everything all at once, that's all tbh I made this cuz of your review on my novel a couple days ago and to be honest with you there's nothing wrong with my English and my novel isn't that bad, I just came back to writing after a whole year of taking a break so...

Love it so far I like that MC is not the only on who is reborn or has a special power and that MC is the villainess and the other heroines r different. And that since I think two of them played this in there last life but Mc didn’t. The original protagonist of the game I’m not really a fan of yet because she thinks she all this and stuff. When we all know The Mc is going to keep being stronger than her I hope. But I hope that the betting she got was humbling for her Ps I think the person who is supposed to be the OG protagonist is a reincarnated person. And is not the MC of this story.