It was pretty good as a light-hearted comedy. Didn’t work too well as an action novel. Some jokes landed on me and made me laugh a bit, but some just weren’t funny to me. I’m at about the part where the MC takes over the gang. The action isn’t well described, but there wasn’t much to begin with. It’s all fine and dandy, but I’ve just read something like that so many times its just become bland to me. I can’t really say much else. It wasn’t executed especially well, or especially terrible. It was just average. Grammar and the like is near perfect, and story flows naturally. Synopsis is slightly clickbait, but that’s alright since it was entertaining nonetheless. One thing that bothers me is the lack of MC’s progress. His power level doesn’t increase at all from chp 1-50, and all he does is redeem some non-lethal skills. Although power progression isn’t the main focus of the novel, I feel like it should be important. With the current power progression, I feel like the story could go on for much longer than I would expect.
