Overall, this is a solid read. The grammar is good and sequences are easy to follow. Personally, I have a hard time enjoying novels where a character is introduced and the action scenes begin before I've had any time to connect with said character, but this novel's prose is quite well done.An exosuit in a cultivation setting is pretty unique too. I don't think I've seen it done before.A couple quick complaints: The protagonist is called Su Yen. Yen isn't a Chinese character, what you're looking for is Yuan.A few of the chapters have typos, which is surprising because the actual chapters themselves are very cleanly written.Again, overall, it's a good read.
