well this my honest review this story has an interesting concept and a good power system i liked it even but there are lots of mistakes in this story it's too fast paced and it could be said that there little to know character development and the mc goal is very vague I don't know what Iam expecting like why do I continue to read and the second is that this story lacks alot of information iIknkw information dumps are boring but sometimes when done correctly gives the story life and the interactions feels very inhuman iIguess it's not that its bad it just feels like robots taking to each other iam not invested in there charcters also so i cant like or dislike them