After Rebirth, I Chased After My Cinnabar Mole. - Reviews

"In this backpack you have everything you need, we put you 10 pokeballs so you can capture more pokemon, you also have 5 potions and 3 total cure. For any emergency you have on your way. "Minerva said as she handed the backpack to her son.

"Is it running?" Dylan asked Brian from behind the drum sets.

"Now, it usually is at this point that the new squad members go to their captains, but today is a joyous day," At this comment, most of those who were not chosen showed annoyed and mad faces, but they listened anyway as the announcer continued. "Today is the day that those with Royal Blood can go obtain their grimoires, the day that our dear young prince Shirou Kira Clover I will receive his grimoire, and as such it was decided that the captains will later reunite those of you that did not make it this time and give you all lessons about magic and share their experiences in hopes that you all can become splendid magic knights that will one day help guard our glorious kingdom and our dear young prince Shirou!"

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

"Everyone from team 10 and team 7 go to the Barbe-Q and get whatever you want it's on me today" Asuma said as everyone cheered up and headed straight towards the Barbe-Q.

I’m up to chapter 45 in the story and wanted to write a review.TL:DR4.5/10Characters, plot, powers and world building are all interesting, execution is terrible. Ruined the whole reading experianceThis is one of the least concrete stories I’ve read. The powers, world building, and plot are very very interesting. However, the execution was terrible. Timelines of events are so messy and jumbled up it makes it hard to read.The MC doesn’t even feel like the main character at all. Just when I’m getting invested to one character the POV swaps right away. The pacing just feels terrible. Everything feels too fast for no reason, it’s like the author keeps having a change of heart in what they want the story to be.Overall, it just gets harder to read. The plot holes keep adding up, or there’s no foundation for the story to build on.

ooh this book has a potential, keep updating author! A friend recommended it to me, so I checked it since I'm a fan of bl so yeah here we go

sue me?try it though, you will definitely like it