After My Wife Had an Affair with Her Assistant, I Chose Divorce - Reviews

This isn't your typical reincarnation story. Which is pretty great in my opinion. If you enjoy stories about war or anything related to the romance of the three kingdoms. You would enjoy this story despite its flaws. The main character isn't extremely over powered and the author was able to devise a proper balancing mechanic in the beginning. If I only read the first half of the story I would've of given it a 5.0. The reason why I had to rate it a lower level is because of several reasons. The first reason is the main character is starting to become a different person. In the beginning of the story you are introduced to a main character that understand he isn't a genius. He has to be cautious and mindful of all his actions. Its the reason why he spent so much time and effort to recruit capable strategists. He gathers information, asks for opinions before he makes any major decisions. Yet, now the main character no longer asks for their opinions and makes rash decisions. The second reason is the main character doesn't exactly understand how the mechanisms of this world actually work. Neither does his lover who was a demon from hell. Her mother does and shes currently in the world as well. If it was the former main character after he discovered she was in this world he would've of asked her how the rules of the world work in order to make himself stronger and used this advantage against other sinners. But this hasn't happened which makes it even more infuriating! The third reason is a pretty big one. You know whats worse than a omnipotent and omniscient main character? An omnipotent and omniscient antagonist. Don't you love novels when the antagonist/s is able to predict, anticipate and convince every other person in the world to go after the main character for no reason at all?  Whats the likelihood a person in modern earth would have extensive knowledge of the waring states in china? Unless you are obsessed with dynasty warriors, a war tactics addict or dramas from this period its very unlikely. Yet the remaining sinners are all quite knowledgeable about this period. Hell even the former antagonist that was the sole mortal enemy to the main character was. Which wouldn't make any sense with his backstory. The fourth reason is the novel no longer has any "balance." In the beginning of the novel we had a system where you'd lose lifespan when you used a skill. The "players" in the world had a advantage over the natives because of their skills, but they had to pay in lifespan. For example one of the sinners has a skill that can can create anything. From skills from other people, to gold, to even clones of other people. He can literally make anything. How the **** is this even legal. No, how isn't this person dead already. This isn't a skill its a goddamn console command. The author is nerfing the main character while buffing his opponents. Did the main character end up playing ******** mode?The fifth reason is the current plot has become so convoluted it can be frustrating for a new reader to get into the novel. A perfect example is in the story we learn that heaven and hell exists. You have angels and demons and humans can become either one after they die depending on their karma. So in that case what the hell is a cultivator? Is he just a angel than because he has angel wings? Why is he trying to turn the native population in world into angels? Why is it possible for a sinner to become a angel? With all their negative karma aren't they more suited to become demons instead? Wasn't the reason why they came into the world was so wash away their sins? Wasn't the reason they came into this world in the first place? But now without completing the game they can just become angels?! Why isn't their a demon trying to turn the native population into demons? We learn that heaven and hell went to war, but we don't know the reason. We haven't had any chapters dedicated to it either.  I'm not trying to be nitpicky I actually want the author to succeed. Hes working hard and hes pretty dedicated and it sucks to see the novel in such low rankings. In my honest opinion this novel probably needs a remake to make it more palatable to new audiences. The karma thing you had with the main character and the dead antagonist would've of been more interesting. For example after he died his soul could have ended up corrupting or taking over another sinner making that person want to kill the main character for revenge. Or he could've been consumed by his heart devil in his lust for power. Maybe he could've of corrupted the angel? The angel seems to have potential to be the final boss, but in current plot shes just a minor villain which really wastes her potential. I really enjoy your other novel by the way. You might want to rename it and give it a better cover I'm sure you'd get a lot more interest that way. Its a shame you need to focus on this one more.

Book seems decent but the horrible grammar and repeating things and calling each other it all the time is horrible

Adoro a história e como ela começou, só não entendo por que adicionar cultivo e esses "VitaShakes" à uma história na qual é baseada em jogo, em vez de enfatizar a habilidade do MC. É igual outra história que li aonde o foco praticamente deixou de ser o jogo para ser quem tinha se "cultivado" ou tomado mais "VitaShakes". A história é sua e respeito, mas sinceramente perdi em 90% a vontade de continuar lendo. Estou no Cap.81 é quando aparece o chefe dos Titãs e percebi que vai ser uma merda, posso está enganado, mas desanimei.

Whoa!!I really find this book interesting..I hope for more!!More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.

well i started reading this and i had no idea of what it was about, the synopsis was great and it it hooked me right away  .this author has a great way with words, in the games he describes the fights the powers in a way thatmade me imagine vivdly in my head ,and in zake's reality too.the mc is relatable i mean he is fighting the urge of being normal with having passion  and i am satsfied with what he chose .the world building is slow but it only gave the storg more depth and i didn't mind it.lastly ,i don't know why is the this story is supported by few when it need to be viral

I like the world so far as though it contains a few cliche elements it is combined in a way and with new ideas that make for an interesting setting and is probably the novel's strongest point.The characters so far have been pretty interesting though outside of a few core characters that are pretty interesting the side characters could be helped by being more distinct.So far the story is good. I wouldn't say amazing as hasn't gone anywhere deep so far, but good enough to keep me interested in how it will continue with some romance and actions. I would like to get some more intrigue and discovery related to MC, his ancestor etc blended with some story progression to elevate the story to a higher level.Now as for the only major downside is the writing quality. I suspect this is a translation rather than original work in English and pronouns are just an absolute mess. No he just him/her get messed up, but even those get messed up with I not infrequently which is a whole other level beyond even what I'm used to from rushed translations. It is even to the point where it can be distracting as I have to re-read paragraphs to figure out which pronouns were meant to be used to understand what the paragraph was supposed to mean.

Here is my honest review XDThe story telling is amazing and im loving the wacky ideas. The plot seems to progress nicely and the character development seems steady and well paced.There are a few grammar mistakes in terms of tenses and word choice but those are passable. If you need deeper information just message me.I love the story so far and am looking forward to reading more.(At the time of this review only 9 chapters had been published)

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Sky_Dragon_SlayerRepliedOi dick face no need to be fuckin insulting. It's not the translators probs that you have - 1 comprehension. If you wanted the good novels to be release in the fuckin **** pool. Then you'll have to wait, there's many good novels out there in the original and translated sections. Give respect to the dude, since he do this for free.AaronJDX:Da tats wat means slot taken( Delayed), Some times u have to translate for the translator? ?

I don't know whether the author know about industry chain or what do you mean by tokyo Shanghai i have no idea wht do you mean by said that.

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"Sialan mulut kamu itu ki, pengen aku tampar aja rasanya. Yaudahlah pacar ku udah nuggu. ngapain aku ngabisin waktu ama jomblo disini" kataku sambil berlari menuju tangga, kamar pacar ku ada dilantai 3.