Adeeba: His sunshine - Reviews

"Let's just fly Kenji, they can't fly," I whispered to Kenji. Kenji nodded and we quickly tried to fly away from them. "NO FLY!" the Good Boy shouted, spelled their magic. We both fell from 30 cm heights.

"How did you manage to find me?" May bakas na ng pagkabalisa ang boses nito ng magtanong.

wake up.... I will show the whole village to you.... * princess Hannah said *

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

After hearing him, Zach just showed white eyes then signaled the servant to get out of the room before he went in and locked it after receiving Dr. Zero's permission. Dr. Zero looked at him while Zach was in his front ready to hand the letter, and said before he drank his coffee  "Just read it for me, I'll be listening."

It's a fantastic feeling, a moments of seeing the human world.

It's good. Don't let chapter 36 (if I dont remember wrongly) fool you, even though this chapter may disappoint you with all the soul crystal thing, dont drop the novel yet. It will become better. The only critic I would make is: the mc is not a villain so the title is misleading and all the plot exposed in the synopsis (three souls in a body and all that stuff) appears only around chapters 100-130 (and is explained quite poorly tbh).The chapters are too short and have a lot of useless information. There is no character development. Even though the mc went trough a lot of things and "mental breakdowns" there is no difference between him before the mental breakdown and after that. These mental breakdowns and "lessons" just serve the purpose of making you believe that the main character is growing, but he still acts and thinks the same way.Anyway, the novel is entertaining if you can ignore or overcome the points mentioned above, so that's all that matters I guess

synopsis made me remember "my pick up artist system" novel, what an art it was but sadly dropped. I will add this for now and read it when there are more chaps.