Can we just talk about how good this author's dialogue is because I am HERE for it. The exchange between Shen Xiyue and Murong Xuan when he's carrying her out of that room is absolutely chef's kiss:
"Your Highness, no! Put me down quickly. You're too frail, you can't carry me..."
"Don't you know whether I'm capable or not?"
I literally laughed out loud. The man just got drugged and nearly lost control on their wedding night and his PRIDE is wounded because she questioned his manliness. The sour expression he wears while being forced to recall his "less-than-stellar performance" is comedic gold.
And then there's Gu Zhilan's dialogue when she's torturing Shen Xiyue to death—"I am a woman of destiny who transmigrated here. Who told you to compete with me?" The casual entitlement in that line is absolutely vile and the author writes it perfectly. She's not even pretending to be remorseful. She just straight-up says her victims are stepping stones and dying for her is an HONOR. The way she lists her skills—making salt, refining sugar, steelmaking—like she's reading a grocery list while describing the destruction of an innocent family. Chilling.
The banquet guests' dialogue is also great for worldbuilding. "A moment of the wedding night is worth a thousand pieces of gold. Let's stop with the pleasantries. Quick, quick, Heir, enter the bridal chamber!" It's exactly the kind of boisterous, slightly crude wedding banter you'd hear, and it makes the horror inside the room feel even more isolating.
Shuangye the maid is another highlight—naturally sociable, completely unaware of the tension, offering to prepare ointment for "discomfort" while Shen Xiyue is internally screaming. The contrast between Shuangye's cheerful innocence and Shen Xiyue's trauma is both funny and heartbreaking.