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Abyssal Evolution
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The sisters didn't continue their talk and headed towards the room were there teacher was. Uka was learning how to write and the other two were learning there respective study material.
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"Well hello to you too," Ash said while pulling the pencil out from the wall. "would you like this back?" He asked her while holding the pencil out in front of him and in grabbing reach from where Alex was.
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'Bakit Loven? Bakit?'
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Buu:my name is Buu and I am not a that
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"Ow," said Writerz.
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Would have been good but the author spends more time describing things than any conversations or char building, I'm fine with OP MC's if they are written well for e.g. him being lead away and his main issues is being there to save people and not the actual fight, that is a good way to write an OP MC, but in the first episode he has skills way beyond the Ghost rider, casually making an AI for no reason, making a company for no reason (he's the damn Ghost Rider ffs), a harem for no reason, and the author really made me read a copy n paste of IT's script for nearly 4 whole chapters are you insane, we don't want half the content to be like that, stick with the 2 you started with, Twilight and The Originals.
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This story matches my dream and fantasy  and I like this story very much??
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great story, added to library for a long time. author has made a huge milestone for a start, can't wait for more

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