A Succubus System? But I'm a Virgin! - Reviews

Rather interesting, nice description of scenes, keeps it toned back enough to let a readers mind fill it in. Definitely good descriptive skill, wish it updated a lot more.

I'm liking the fact that the main character is starting to grow. Not going to lie and say that I was a little off put by how dense the main character was. But the fun this is that the succubus inside her head is doing a good job of steering her where she needs to go. I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of this pans out.

I just finish d this up to chapter 11 and I was about to give up but then the main character finically started to get her head and butt together. The story is starting to shape up nicely.

I actually really like this one and Is probably my favorite of any of the other stories I've read from you. I do hope you eventually continue it.

I love the MC and the original succubus. Unlike in " A Fox's system" Or your rewrite of "A Fox's Systems" I feel the banter between the MC and the Succubus to be a lot more natural and funny.

The story seems to progress at a rate I am really satisfied with and I like that there does seem to be actual story arcs with some consequences such as the end of Ch. 10.

I do like that the story doesn't seem to be afraid of violence and death. It's also kind of fun and amusing watching the innocent MC turn into a ***-fiend against her will.

I am also glad that we got the one and all holy YURI! Oh, how I've dreamed of it. I am kind of hoping that the two girls become companions and that follows the MC as she travels. I even like the idea that eventually the MC has them heal and bring her body back to her parents or that something happens such as the Succubus possessing her former body.

This is also a type of story I've been wanting to read for years. Overall I am a fan of this and do hope we get more.

the mc makes me very ANGRY, she din't want killing people just because they are humans. i Realy want to hit for her stupidity.
she thinks so simply than make me sick and the developpement of the history is just so slow.