A Secret Ambition - Reviews

The girl gripped the sofa with one hand, while her other hand seized my thigh, her hair disheveled from her flinging her head about. She looked so lewd, completely different to her pure and cute appearance from before.

"I'm up!"

I looked over at him and then back at the man I was speaking with.

And all that glitters is gold

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

I spent most of this period lazing around the starting area fountain. I drew characters in the sand with a stick. Part of me was hoping that by doing nothing Serenity would have to call off my assistance and yank me out of this world. But, she seemed completely content with lazing beside the fountain with a group of beta players serving her every need like some real goddess.

Really like your story , please keep it updated but one thing i found is that everything is described in minute details. Maybe that can be avoided just my POV...

The story was kinda interesting, I would like to say that it's highly recommended for those readers who loves fantasy keep it ?hope it will become successful in a future

This story has a promising plot, whilst I enjoy it, I hope the author updates more often and doesn't suddenly drop the story...??

This novel pulled me in from the first sentence! The eerie, poetic tone mixed with vivid descriptions makes every moment feel immersive. The tension, mystery, and fast-paced action are so well balanced, I couldn't look away. The writing is gripping, and I can't wait to read more. Amazing job! :3

Only a couple chapters but so far I really like it! The backstory is unique and I like how it takes someone who should have everything and instead make them struggle and grow.  Only 3 chapters so far so I hope it continues and and gets more popular!

i don't like it..............................