A nanny for the billionaire CEO - Reviews

Tirus, and the soldiers, including the ones that remained to maintain the shield wall, suddenly heard a rough voice that sounded out from the entrance of the Gate.

"Can I join the Astronomy Club?" I asked and they gave me a shocked face

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

Review at chapter:247I have to say it’s a pretty nice story. We have a smart competent mc, who got a goal forced on to him by a Godly entity. The story has a decent power progression and there is always a showcase of power by stronger entities to keep the mc in his place. There are also a difficult condition the mc is placed on where he has to trust tge Godly entity to obtain his true powers but this goes completely against the mocks personality, which in turns adds a bit of intrigue of weather mc will slip and trust someone only to be schacled by his decision. So yeah the Godly entity is kinda tricking him(fuck her btw).The story also is quiet dynamic where you actually get to see life of a mercenary to a life of a narcotic seller. Thr mc has a neutral personality he is willing to kill but not actively seeking it. And a wiered attachment to hover bike.I would say this book has good potential and by the previous works of the author it seems he is visited with his upload schedule and story developement. Just saying whenever I read the book I have a sense of curiosity cause the book dosent run on the normal cliche story points. One day mc is building his cabal and 3 months later is is participating in invasion of a different planet as cannon fodder.

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First of all, I have to say that I thought the story was going to be good, but it feels great to see a work of this caliber. Please note that I am doing this novel review after 20 chapters.When blacksmithing is involved in any story, the story can already hook me and finding a story like this is enough to elevate the novel outline.The main character managed to attract me because he was quite interesting. Personally, I like to read about main characters with outstanding and incredibly evil personalities, so it is a good thing in my eyes to love such a main character.I can't say much about World Building, personally, I can't say much about it as I think it will unfold like tree branches as it progresses, after all, as I said, after reading only 20 chapters, I thought this story deserved a review.I couldn't help but smile, especially when I saw the message of Edward, the NPC we saw at the beginning, I hope we will be able to see more of him because the author gave him an interesting task and had him complete it in his first appearance.So, all things considered, it would be completely ridiculous not to give this novel 5 stars. Of course, this is my opinion.