A LOVE OF LIFE - Reviews

"but, she is pretty. we got new competition." said the previous girl grumbling to her friend.

Dev and Ashi reached the hospital with an unconscious Bhumi, who was admitted in the ICU. Later, Bhumi was shifted to the general ward, but she didn't regain consciousness. Half a day passed, Ashi was nursed to sleep with the help of the hospital staff, Bhumi was still unconscious, and Dev was even more stressed than before. Dev's father had called to check up on their trip, and Dev had lied that they had safely reached their destination. Dev couldn't dare to tell his parents the truth for fear that they would be devastated and panic uncontrollably.

[?] - "You are stupid.  Why would you tell her you are weak? "

"Congratulation to the host for returning safely to the Divine Lotus World!"

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

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I like that it's not all about war and their prowess their are also part that you can't stop but laugh when Raon and Wrath is bantering each other

it's a nice novel......interesting so far

Have to say I was pleasantly surprised by this story. At first I was skeptical, but it delivered quite a good story. As my first review I have to say well done to the author for this novel. The only complaint I have is Will's and June's relationship. It seems forced and would love just a few more chapters for just them. Their relationship seems to be going well but at times it feels like June is slowly being forgotten. Other than that as of now after binge reading all the chapters so far I have to say keep up the great work and I'm anticipating more!

This is interesting when is the rest coming I can't wait

Sorry author-sama I'm dropping this novel. I read up til chp 123 I believe, titled Red Dress. The concept of the story was what got me into reading it, but when he turns 10 it starts getting fast paced. After discovering the oil in the parched lands it was nothing but invention after inventions popping up real fast, wasn't even stretched out but more skimmed over, not what I wanted to read in a worldbuilding novel. Now its to the point in the story we see  the female lead when he's 11 years old, and she's 10 (as I'm writing this, they have yet to meet). She's quite basically the same as him just not in the magical class but the warrior class. Which is ok for most stories but in this one it just feels forced, it doesn't seem natural (she's his arranged fiance by both parents). For me this was the last flag.Hope people still read this though these are just my preference and opions. The writing quality is good.Storytelling in the beginning is good; now not so much.Character description is good.World building is there....Overall the concept is good but, unfortunately for me it just hit and missed the mark.