A Long, Long Journay: The rise of the fallen - Reviews

Amazing, just amazing this book is ? ?                                  .

Repetitive. Made it about 30 chapters so far and so far what I've figured out is that the villain probably has a mind control ability and is using it to control MC's previous women as well as other allies. That's just what I'm thinking the story will go but NTR isn't my thing especially if I'm going to see it with the ones he's getting close to currently

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The MC personality is not realistic for an adventure/fantasy setting. She is way to ***** and acts more like someone whose never been outside her house. The process of the characters is slow and the novel updates slowly. The novel has a lot of potential and I hope as the story moves along it'll get better and better.

" You must be kidding me"  said Gilo as he furrowed his brows.

the area was  dead silentl  before

Habang naglalakad ako pa-simply na lumilinga ako sa paligid dahil baka may makakita sa akin sa mga tauhan ni Kiko. Nang makita ko na safe naman nakahinga na ako ng maluwag.

Doors had been closing down on her. She had arranged a social gathering tonight to collect some funds for her mother surgery. Close family friends and aboard family members were invited. Not all of them showed up due to the fear of Mo Liang. The remaining few that showed up, declined to help her.

Puff's eyes became big and bounced around her.

to be continued...

"Why doesn't he stick around then"

"Shut up! "