First, thanks for this book.
Here is my review;
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The story and world background, power system and the system item has a very good concept. The idea behind it is great if you understand what the author is trying to portray. The same applies to the character.
But here are the challenges;
Though, there is a very good concept, the way they are executed are poorly done. The characters feels plain, the descriptions are the same. The emotions aren't shown or are almost nearly non-existent.
For example, Lucian or rather the main character of this story is supposed to be a veteran, an S rank adventurer but the way he is written as makes him look more of an amateur than a veteran. His thought process is almost like a kid, and even kids have emotions but we readers didnt feel any. For example
