Z entropy theory

Writer has creative ideas for story but lacks the writing ability. The main characters have very little growth and their dialogues are very unnatural.  There were often quotations around paragraphs that did not seem like conversation. I hope to see the author improves in writing ability.

a good time killer now at this time of pandemic, thanks for very interesting novels

"first things first, how about introducing ourselves? my name is *blabla* what's yours?" i don't know why but my mind auto filtered his name, so i will just refer to him as shelter leader, it is simple and as i don't plan to remain in this world for ever or any other mission world for the matter, remembering the names of people that i will most likely never meet again is useless