Yamcha RPG (continuation) - Reviews

Kakashi is marrying Hana Inuzuka. They're marrying in a garden type place(AUTHOR: Where Naruto marries at the end of the Shippuden series.) Yeah thanks Author! (AUTHOR: Any time.) The wedding is going to be in one week.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

Hey, so I started reading this new story, and it's pretty good! It's a romantic fantasy, and the main characters are really interesting. The plot has a lot of potential, and I can see it becoming even better if the author develops it well. I gave it 4 stars for now since it has a few cliches that I'm particularly not a fan of, and I also noted some parts that repeat themselves a bit. It's not a big deal, but it could be smoother. Oh, and this is the author's first book, so I'm trying to be fair. I'll keep reading and see how it goes. Maybe I'll update my review later with more details or a different rating.

Read until chapter 15 and then kinda bounced around to see if the story picked up. So in those chapters the MC has zero growth that we read about wheather in the systems power or his own personal growth. We see him use zero skills or magic really. MC goes around making enemies of the guards and servants like that helps his odds at surviving. No world building beside we know there is 4 kingdoms and the church. We know c loathe humans but does nothing else but think he is smart and making plans we know nothing about while doing nothing. Like a teenage girl in a bad movie writing in a jornal about future plans. I’m also confused how he knows he is a necromancer when we see nothing in the system stating that. He also never once purposely used the skill corrupt to see what it does just for the help of it. It’s like we are suppose to know all these things in advance is their a part 1

I'm hooked on this story! The characters are beautifully designed and the plot is really starting to take shape. ? Can't get enough of the amazing character designs in this story! ?  This story keeps getting better and better! Loving the way the plot is developing. ?

This story is a true piece of work from the sypnosis to the story it's really amazing the author did a great job so guys I recommend this book you can add it to your collections

The story is so good. I became interested in reading because of Biringan city because I like to watch documentaries and vlogs about Biringan and the culture and history in the Philippines were shown properly in the story. Also, how the looks of the characters and the fighting scene are described very detailed that I can visualize or I can imagine the scenes or characters in my mind.