At the start it was a bit rough, the world building and character design was great, but the writing was bit off and sometimes there wasn’t enough context. As the story continues though it improves a lot. I like the current style waayy better, and I think the pacing is great too, it did also feel a little slow in the beginning but its perfect now, wish the chapter release rate was higher, but if that means the quality will drop im fine with how it is. I love dark fantasies, with eldritch lovecraftian elements, this is great, what a gem keep up the work author??
