Xk-1307 - Reviews

"Yes, I am alright."

"I know for certain that the company is planning a reveal party for our new sweet. Ming Na is working in the R&D team so if something happened to the recipe she was working on..."

"Lo naman! Ayoko."

Snow gave one big lunge, souring through the air. In that moment, with the wind all around her, she could see half the kingdom, with lights shining out of homes with families enjoying the little food they can get in these parts of the kingdom.

Today, I'm trying to pass up the Star Map to my superior. I also sent a copy to a few of the astronauts, without putting my name on it. There's supposed to be a meeting today, in which I hope they'll mention my work. They should talk about that, because it is quite a life saver for the astronauts, and they'll want to know who came up with it. Since I sent them a copy, even if my boss doesn't mention it, they probably will. He may come to resent me for passing over his head, but at this point, I don't really care about him since I know he'll be replaced soon enough.

I tried pressing my thighs together but he had pinned them away.

Josephine gazed at me, as she realized.

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Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Its dead red eyes scanned over the body as a disjointed voice came from his open mouth piece, "Touch, smell, taste, sight, sound. This body, my vision, will soon have all of these. It will be the next step in evolution. Perfect in every way. So yes, it truly is beautiful."

"Its been a while Naruto-kun" At my happy proclamation he nodded as we chatted at bit like old times in the academy before Sauske grunted as the time for the exams was aAfter Anko's dramatic entrance and her speech we moved out and i fixed my attention on the grass nin, whose body Orochimaru planned to take... I talked with my teammates in casual conversation as i felt Orochimaru take over the grass nin's body and kill the remaining two members by the time we had to move in front of the gate, as the signal was given Kabuto innocently put forward the idea that since we were sufficiently strong enough we should split up and search for scrolls individually. As we moved in different directions i made two reinforced shadow clones one to assist Naruto and his team in case some changes occur and other with the instructions to lock onto the chakra signature of Orochimaru and follow him for this day forward.

It is an okay novel with a bad writing quality in the beginning, but it did get better later on. The story is quite around the place, however, still understandable and could use a few more words with each chapter. Character designs can be great to okay, so far this novel is not too bad and not too good. It is the author's second webnovel and has potential to be better.