Great opening and solid introduction the male and female leads. I like how the pasts of both characters is still largely shrouded in mystery to be unraveled along with the plot. Definitely curious to see where the story goes from here. Spelling and grammar are tight, with only the very odd typo. Prose is clean and flows well. I do hope to see more.. give it a try... if you are into vampires & werewolves, you will definitely like it.
