World Merge - Reviews

She suddenly  felt extremely tired, annoyance crept up on her as Kai tried rocking her to sleep. Raina was extremely tempted to close her eyes but she quickly grabbed a pillow got up and yawning widely. She grabbed a blanket from the edge of the bed as she bolted for the bathroom. Locking the door she went to the bath. Laying half the thick blanket in the bath she placed the pillow at the top of the bath before climbing under the other half of the blanket. It's was extremely cozy and warm. Raina quickly drifted to sleep snuggling in the blanket.

Zeux went to the military sub HQ because the city planning department was also located there. He asked for an available residential space. Rod the person Zed was talking to presented him with the available space of land.

My main problems with this novel are the sentence structure/grammar and the occasionally clunky dialogue. However, the rest of the story is definitely on fire; multi-cultural Gods and Goddesses, a funny main character, and no idea where things  will go next. I look forward to the wild ride ahead of Rey!

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??

such a nice work , keep going and you have my full support whatever I can.do your best ??

Whilst there is only one chapter with content currently released I find myself very intrigued as to how the story will progress and it has already grabbed my attention as the characters portrayed so far make for very entertaining interactions.My only nitpicks are the lack of spacing which is a minor issue as the grammar is impeccable and the infrequent updates. (One chapter in 17 posts and not updated for two months so I'm hoping this hasn't been dropped before it has begun, as it truly does have some quite a bit of potential from the author.)