I really liked the first few chapters. Coz it looked true and not all rainbows and roses.. But it felt awkward when Riot started having feelings for her.. Could have done with a brother like figure.. I don't know how to feel about Gabriel's interaction with her father.. Though it seems straightforward, he is not aware of all the facts but is disrespectful.. Lastly I'm not fond of the leads torturing each other .. Especially not misunderstandings about Gabriel and Evelyn. Hopefully the locked chapters don't have much angst.
