What the Bones Say - Reviews

?????: Now even if you lick my foot i am not gonna spare you.

Hope's haste to leave the hospital left her vision clouded. The paintings on the wall turned into a blur as she darted out of the hospital. Before she knew it, Hope ran into a brick wall. Nope, nevermind it was a person. His hand shot out after her but was met with the empty air.

both our eyes widen  at that loud roar I recognized it  and I finally realized why they ran away it wasn't because of  me it was because of those  creatures

"I ..." I stared at Tom as he spoke. "I hope you'll tell me the state of the world today.

"Carl, you killed your own parents."

It’s as gritty as I expected and I’m here for all that, wish I could chain the author to his keyboard for faster updates

What time is it ? When I can find your update ? See you next chapter Morena

Overall good start with great potential some dialogues feel cliche though but its pretty interesting and unique, lets see where it goes in future.