Wargod Ares - Reviews

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The next day arrives with the sound of birds chirping. One of the few sounds that I miss from the old days is the sweet sounds of birds. This sound is something I need to hold dear to my heart and never forget when things get dark. I really hope Historio lets me join the Survey Corp. Well, I guess I should go get some food before heading out. Hmm, I wonder what I should get. Sigh who am I lying to there's never an option with the military. I drag my body towards the cafe and see what's for food.

[Tsubame Gaeshi] - Aktif - Biaya Lvl.30 MP: 50 - Kenaikan AGI sebesar 2 per level

When he noticed that the enemy has stopped sending their forces to kill them, Adam decided to start his own offensive.

Uhh.. excuse me?

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Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

Its pretty good, the grammars good, the characters are good but can be totally improved, although I know the characters are like that because this is like a fast overview, so its okay. The writing style is okay and can be improved. Overall it's a pretty good story. It's not confusing at least so that's a plus ?

Seems interesting; the writing is pretty good, and the characters stand out so far. It definitely reminds me *a lot* of hunger games. I hope it can live up to it!