WRONG - Reviews

great story .give it a chance, and you won't be disappointed. witty banter ,mc getting thrown under the bus by female leads . with alot of head slaps lol.

"Bad news?" He asked again. Lyrzie was full of question mark. He can't understand but some part of him understands. "What bad news, daddy? What is bad news?" He asked.

Although he was a killer in his previous life he just can't help but feel some connection between this little girl and him. Especially whenever he look at those bright eyes of hers, it reminds him of his childhood friend when he was young in his previous life. Those bright eyes that makes his world bright, those bright eyes that bring happiness to him, and also those bright eyes that brings the immense sadness inside of him.

"Pero no te desanimes, ya que tienes mucha suerte fuiste asesinado por el mayor asesino del universo y también te daré la oportunidad de renacer con 3 deseos" dijo Dios con una sonrisa divertida en su cara.

Alyss dismissed the matter and they continued traveling.

"I find you Kekkei Genkai to be very interesting by the way. I would love to study it with you, maybe we can both learn more about it" Haku looks at marix skeptically "How could you do that? You can't copy a Kekkei Genkai like a normal jutsu even with Sharingan." Marix smirked "Well I am also a scientist. Water has three forms you know. Mist can be counted as a gas form of water. Water itself is liquid state. Ice is the solid state. Technically speaking it should be possible to create ice jutsu using water release just no one has figured out how to make it solid yet. But I have two bloodlines. One is a Metal Kekkei Genkai that gives me full control over metal, any metal. I can even make metal from my own chakra. My second one is called Mujun. It allows me to fuse things easily. Such as I can fuse Earth and Water to use the wood element without having the Kekkei Genkai of the Senju clan."

"You are just like your Grandfather..."

Only shooting stars break the mold

The author is perfect and the plot of the novel is wonderful. I will recommend it to my friends. I hope the author can go on. Why doesn't anyone like it?

I really like the story, I think it's worth reading, and it's clear from the first chapter that it has great world building.