WIP Sci-Fi Project - Reviews

"I went through a few encrypted files, and I found a mention about experimenting on vampires that they had caught."

Walking by the corridor he could see students having classes through windows, after a bit of time they arrived in a room with lots of chairs around a big table and at every chair was a person sitting.

"Mana" (your endurance in channeling your thoughts in a special way)

I said yep what a concept

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

As a fellow author it pains me to see that you have so many grammatical errors in your synopsis. Please get yourself a software to fix those mistakes

This one has the flavor of a Japanese RPG. Is the protagonist the big devil?? I don’t know how the plot will develop. I look forward to future updates.

Some reasons that I know that my book is an average book which some people may like is that it has a lot of suspense. It really goes through those stages of little events that happen before something big comes up, the quality of the details in my opinion is that it explains some moments you might not be able to imagine more thoroughly in my book. Every newbie should be given a chance and so far, I think that my book is doing good.

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I don't think there are words to describe how much I liked the novel and the emptiness I felt after completing it.The way the story's written is so good, with information on the world slowly being unraveled as we explore it along with the mc just keeps you anticipating and speculating about what might happen next.