Us Three - Reviews

seems like a great read..ill start on this one...

this book is amazing & cannot wait for the second.. this is a must read guys.. you will not be disappointed!!!! author plz release chapters for book 2 & give us a title when u do release because I have to know what happens...

Amazing book can't wait for the next book.  I want them to come right back looking for her,for them to think maybe something happen to her then maybe a year after they may bump into eachother. her with twins and way better confident and stronger  then before. they have to gain her forgiveness/trust

Really love it. Thanks for the author and traduction.

This novel is great even if it is unfinished. I do not know if it has been dropped or just not translated but definitely isn't finished here.
First zombie read and I really liked it characters and plot are very good. Relationships are pretty decent. Adult content very sparse.

Negatives are:
Bad translation into mtl translator
Lots of repeating same thing for first 50-100 chapters.
Finally gets to decent translation and:
Chapters began to be cut in half or thirds w/ 32 word paragraphs advertising in both parts. About 239 chapters were split.
Stupid translator notes explaining things that don't need to be explained or trying to explain common idioms as rare
Randomly dropping part of characters names. I.e. yu wen xuan and wu peng fei to just wen xuan and peng fei.
One of his companions names get removed so it's sentences like "they confronted and the distance.."
Adult content is pretty poor.

Overall worth a read and definitely should be ranked higher.

Because it's a machine translator a.k.a. MTL

Birdrizz LOL!!

Don't know bro. I've read one of the authors other work, which is city of sin. His novels are unique which is something 90% of webnovels lack. I guess some people would rather read my three beautiful wives are vampires than a story where you can't see anything coming like this one.

maybe ch 210

overall 3/10 wouldn't recommend.Some light spoilers. I have read it to about 588.Writer is willing to come up with a lot of new ideas but he refuses to define them, it's very annoying, for example when he/his pets get a skill his useless phone doesn't explane what they are they, he leaves them ambiguous to define them later as to what the situation needs.He gets a weird letter from his stepmother's father, he doesn't discuss it with her, why? no reason, later he finds out that he (his step mom's father) is stuck somewhere and his step mother is going to a dangerous place to find him, she asks the MC if her father left anything with him, he says no, why? nobody knows, does he even try to figure it out? NO, IT HAS BEEN MORETHAN 400 CHAPTERS! CMON MANNNNN. sorry I lost my self. the dialogue between the MC and the other characters is lacking a lot, for example when any character becomes a little bit more rational and starts to think and ask good questions the writer decides to shut them up with  "sense they didn't tell me I can't ask them" line, like Huhh? it's just lazy and annoying.and jäk's arc was so irrational, brainless, stupid and trying too hard, he is an evil man he doesn't abide by laws and kills people left and right on a whim, with a lot of difficulty we were able to capure him and imprison him, now let's cut him a deal if he can capture a 16 year's old kid at the legendary stage and bring him over we will let him be free again to kill more people and cause chaos in this chaotic world.Lastly, why does no one question the MC's powers? they all treat it as a given, I think they know he is the MC.

The story is a little unique, as is the title. I was immediately engrossed after reading the first chapter! I was eager to read more, and I couldn't wait to do so. I truly like how you wrote it, and it's a pleasure to read. It's now in my library.?

Great book! Love the beginning and the book itself. this is my first time reading an eastern fantasy book and it's amazing! keep it going author! You are doing a great job!