This is the best novel that I have read. The part of the kibgdom buildibg is really great, but there is sone issues in my opinion. First of all, there is more granmatical errors in the last chapters that you have released and they are pretty obvious for me even though english is not my first langage. Secondly, I was a bit taken back by the reaction of henry after his last battle. He was feeling full guilty even though it was not his fault and he was almost dead because of the magician. He has even asked before his subordinate if he has upgraded his kingdom. That’s a lot out of his character and this is showing a very stupid weakness that does not make sense. Before him, his kingdom was trash and now his kingdom is triving because of him. Thirdly, I think henry gave too much importance on earth war strategies and not enough importance for his mana cultivation. Even with the best strategy of the world, it does not mean a thing if his ennemy is like Luna and can crush him like a bug.Also, to conquer the world, it takes a long time and mana cultivation can increase his lifespan a lot. That would give enough time for henry to conquer the world. Also, after his defeat, henry has not even constated that his defeat was due to his lack of mana power and he has only blamed himself like a weak man compared to his old self. Finaly, I have read the last review and I also don’t think that is possible to finish this story with 350 chapters. In my estimate, the novel would have 1000 chapters or at least 700-800 chapters. Please author, don’t ruin the potential of the story just to finish it early.
