Universal System - Reviews

"May I help you?" The voice startled him out of his reverie, and Satan turned back to the receptionist, who was looking at him impatiently.

3.Cliche wishes or powers:sharingan,saiyan bloodline,instant mastery, some form of system,devil fruit power,haki,perfect memory,kryptonian,some unique cultivation veins or bloodline, heaven defying cultivation technique that is actually weak because a true heaven defying cultivation technique will make the MC too op too fast,dragon slayer magic,hollow powers,shinigami powers

"Phoebe is an exceptional arboreal expert. Rach couldn't win a state level Chemistry competition because of a flu. Justin was able to fix a highly complicated robot and reconfigure it too. Brad is an expert in body language and can make his body lie too. He has exceptional social skills. And after all that we've been through as partners, you could at least trust me."

"Maria." I replied.

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

I have now been married ten years. I know what it is to live entirely for and with what I love best on earth. I hold myself supremely blest- blest beyond what language can express; because I am my husband's life as fully as he is mine. No woman was ever nearer to her mate than I am: ever more absolutely bone of his bone and flesh of his flesh. I know no weariness of my Edward's society: he knows none of mine, any more than we each do of the pulsation of the heart that beats in our separate bosoms; consequently, we are ever together. To be together is for us to be at once as free as in solitude, as gay as in company. We talk, I believe, all day long: to talk to each other is but a more animated and an audible thinking. All my confidence is bestowed on him, all his confidence is devoted to me; we are precisely suited in character-perfect concord is the result.

"Ku ku ku, you definitely want to make an interesting villain huh? Ku ku ku." Jester laughing with his typical laugh.

Honestly I want to like this novel. I really do. Like, I see the potential it has but theres just that one thing thats really bugging me. It's the fact that he is so... submissive. Now what do I mean by that? He's clearly a dork who has never had a girlfriend in his life. He's a simpleton who would likely give up all his powers if his mom, mother (He has two moms) and sister asked him to. In our everyday language he would definitely be a simp. I think the thing that really bugged me was him admitting his secret to his sister. I said it in a comment but I found the build up for him telling the secret to be plainly infuriating and terrible. Author, in the nicest way possible I want to tell you that it was bad. But the big kicker is the fact that although he has all this power his real personality is still so...wimpy. It's Honestly disappointing and I unfortunately will choose to drop this novel. If anyone else can stand a simpleton who acts like he's chasing skirts with the mind of a 30 year old man whose never been a women then feel free.

I love this book so much please update soon there are a few grammar errors, but the book is so good.

dEMON SAVING BEAUTIES; he got a summon but is afraid and intimidated by her... this would have been a gem if the mc was cold or ruthless but the way he behaved with his first summon and i just read harem here ah ah .. this is not for me

I'm a first time writer. This book has a new power system and power scaling and isn't like your generic novels or manhwa, it isn't a weakest to the strongest nor an already overpowered MC. Read this book and give feedback. I'm all in for criticism.

another great story from this author (I'm bad with names) the mc is kinda a narcissist this time as well it least he's not red haired of half something maybe im only at chapter 35 he might be a half elf or something anyway keep up the good work