Turtle's Fan Fiction Collection

absolutely beautiful...cant just stop myself from reading this...a must read

I like the story but the chapters are short and the first 2-3 paragraphs are duplicated from the previous chapter.  I know it has to be difficult to write sex scenes but they are basically repetitions of each other. Overall a good effort and still enjoyable.

great book but how long are this story going to go on it's time for Luke and Bianca be happy they have gone through a lot Luke missing for about 5 years and Bianca 3 years let this family be happy

she never gets to know about them until seven years later...Shanice is just using him and he is serious about them