Till I collapse, - Reviews

"Ungrateful child!!!!!  How can you keep the elders and elders of our families waiting," King Yun shouted completely furious at his son.

[skill [Monster Language (Ancient)] is on effect]

And all that glitters is gold

Hey now, you're Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

Me:who are you

We don't even know why humans can't see our world, why we can't interact with them.

"Your welcome desu."

its good to be honest...                            .

Character development Is good Pacing is good Generally the book is a good read You’d love it^~^

When I read the first chapter , I wanted to read the rest.I could see the different behavior in the characters. I really enjoyed reading.Except for the minor issues, your story is by far the best.

good book .                                          .

Interesting storyline, engaging and excited. MC is a bit on the unpredictive and stuborn side surrounded by his followers. Going back to the times when everything started, MC try his best to correct his past mistakes and developed his teritory and protect his family.