The who that I really am - Reviews

"What do you mean it will make my day?! This... This girl... Only will make my day become worse than before!"

"Suniu, what are you doing here, what is swinging your arms...*gasp*"

"X-Scissor Slash!" Dave yelled out as he created an X shaped blade made of of Elms. The X cleaved through the mech leaving the cockpit untouched while all 4 limbs were cut off. Dave smiled like a junkie as he waited for the Admiral to get serious. The pale man slowly came out of the wreckage as he peered at a yellow skinned human standing in plane sight.

I have to say that this book isn't bad at all. Like the idea of having the MC be a bit different from the usual MC's we see, in terms of race. It's a breath of fresh air. I also like how the conversations flow. The dialogue between the three friends make the book a but more lively, so that's another plus... Now for the cons... There's a lot of unnecessary info being dumped in all at once, especially in the first chapter. There are minor grammatical errors that can't be noticed easily and more than a few punctuation errors. The Way it is written in first person is also a big turn off for me (personal issue). It think the story would be better if told in third person. Overall, is till think this is a good one, as it is very comfortable to read. 4.0/5.0... ?

Dear readers,I want to take a moment to thank you for embarking on this journey with me. As some of you may know, this story is a fresh beginning, a complete reinvention of what I once tried to create. The original work was filled with amateur mistakes—narrative flaws, plot inconsistencies, and a lack of originality that I simply could not ignore. With this new novel, I have poured my heart and soul into every word, bringing together all the tools and insights I’ve gathered over the years to build a fantasy world that feels vivid, immersive, and alive.Unlike the previous version, this story sets a deliberate pace. The first 150 chapters are dedicated to establishing a rich world full of complex characters, intriguing relationships, and perilous challenges that will test our protagonist, Raimon, at every turn. Each event, each piece of dialogue, serves to build a foundation that will sustain the narrative for the many adventures to come. It is a world I hope you can lose yourselves in, one with depth, beauty, and dangers that lurk in every shadow.I welcome any and all feedback. Your thoughts, whether praise or critique, are invaluable as they help me shape and refine this world. If, by chapter 80, you find that the story hasn’t met your expectations, I will understand if you choose to step away, and I sincerely apologize for any time you feel may have been wasted. But if this tale captures your imagination, I promise that the journey beyond will be worth every step.This novel has been in the making for over three years, and I am excited to share it with you. It is a story crafted with care and passion, and one that I hope will resonate with you as deeply as it does with me. We will explore not just the battles and victories of our protagonist but also the meaning of loyalty, courage, and sacrifice. There are countless adventures ahead, and Raimon's path is only just beginning.Thank you for your time, your attention, and your trust in my work. Let’s dive together into a world of magic, danger, and dreams.With gratitude,[BlueHanma]

I honestly really liked the story and the characters of this novel (except Asher he’s an asshole), it really reminded me of the start of My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, but after a certain point in the story it just begins to fall down hill. Characters are abandoned and plot lines are left unfinished for such a long period of time. Now these characters a d plot lines may come back in the future but I doubt it. I did like this novel and I might pick it back up at some point in the future but at this current time, I’m unwilling to continue paying for a story I’m not enjoying.

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good story line and the book name was on another level

Man this is  great. Love it. ? Action, system, adventure and without harem! The world building and writing make me genuinely shiver for their gargantuan scale and ambiance. The MC is not OP either! Hope the author gets enough revenue to do this full-time and update daily?

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