The rise of the legendary ninja - Reviews

3. Which occurred first?

"Mom Hurry up, we will be Late to collect my starter!" I say as I run to My Bicycle, with the new X-24 ultra Bike, you can shrink it and carry it anywhere. I got it for my 8th birthday, "Im coming, shouted my mom as she and her Pokemon ran after me, "Baaaaalll" Shouted Her Pokemon, She got it from Grandma on her 10th birthday, ever since, Mom always kept it with her, "Ill miss you too Baltoy!"

It was like watching an Ant suffer the same fate as him. So when the Ant dies, only a slight bit of feel sadness invade his hurt. That is what he feels.rather thanbe a Kid Pissing on an Anthill. He would feed them, and then watch him. If they could talk then he would feed them and rule over them. A Godamongstall living things.

"Ok, I'm sorry Loki. It was wrong for me to have done that to them, I shouldn't have played with their lives like that. I won't do it again." Rykar relented, accepting all responsibility with a downcast face.

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Battle Power: 3]

"Hello there," said a Doctor while waving his hand to me.

the mc will become stronger or not? .................  ...................................  ...................................  ..................

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Really a hidden gem tbh it’s very good. The story is a tiny tiny slow. But feels just right 99% of the time

Well I feel like the writing quality and the plot is pretty good and the fight scenes are amazing. But the whole power system levels and evolution needs to be more flushed out