The realm - Reviews

I made dash with some one. He was so terrific, With board chest and strong arms. And with eyes big and face black. That made fierced. And ran away from there.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

And so then he laughed at my clumsiness and then realized something. And looked at me strangely that day because no one can see them unless they want to be seen or the other person is a god or part/ demi-god you know? And so he wondered what god made me since I was definitely not his brothers since I didn't look at all like them and he himself never remembered seeing a little girl being made made from himself. At least he was sure he never made me. Then he thought about the Demi-gods and none seemed to match with me. I was just something that came from no where. Wasn't every really made by any god.... I was just me...and so he left me there and I suddenly was given the thing that ruined my life completely, godly power...hahah.....

- good at writing dialogue - ok, world development , still early in the novel- ok, mc and other character - too fast-paced for my taste - she got a human body to quickly - it feels a lot like slime anime over all 6.7/ 10 . will continue. I hope the author improves while writing  .