For a Naruto fanfic, it’s not bad. There are a couple naming issues here and there, with one or two characters ending up having Chinese and English names which obviously stand out next to the Japanese names (though idk if they had Japanese names originally but translators kept fighting over which one to use).The story starts off pretty weak, ngl, but it picks up momentum near the middle and pulls you along for the ride right til the end. Kinda wish there was an afterstory slice-of-life style for the MCs life cause I wanna see what he accomplishes, but I guess the author thought there would be no big plot left to discuss.But imo there is definitely room for an sequel, since the MC made a lot of changes to the world already. I wouldn’t mind even if the story ends up just being MC playing around as the “giant hand behind the scenes”, manipulating the people of the world to go on adventures and stuff.All in all, a pretty decent reading experience if you know what you’re getting into. Nothing that will blow your mind, but will get some chuckles out of you.
