The World Awakens - Reviews

"Emergency lock… complete" [NEXO]

Shani, worshipped and revered by the humans for being the God of Karma and Justice was looking at his cute little half-brother with great love, while sitting on a drifting throne from one of the accretion disks. It was almost a shock to his lovely wives "Manda" and "Neelima" that the dense deity could actually love anyone else apart from his own children "Manthi" and "Kuligna".

THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED

"Sure"

After reaching the bus station she took the bus for airport and went on ..

" Anyway, no matter I will just make a new one. Just for you three. "

"...I am the hope of the universe....I am the answer to all living things that cry out for peace...I am the protector of the innocent...I am the light in the darkness...I am truth. Ally to good... Nightmare to you!!!....

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So much to do, so much to see

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The story is good. I like how he calls himself king, when he obviously isn't all there is right now XDThe writing could use some work. Maybe get editing software? There are free ones. But story-wise, this is solid material. I'm adding it to my library :)Keep doing the good work :)

Cool novel, i like the pacing and story so far.and yeah the cover is next level dude, like how do you even make that. Could you help a guy with some advice? Especially the text and the background it just integrates with the novel. Could you please advice me on how you created the text part cause that will be really helpful.