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Good three day read, I would recommend reading but some parts are a bit tedious. There is several one-to-two liner explanations to cover/pass over story events. This didn't allow for the interactions between charactes to really develop past readers first introductions and also so much of the reasonings for MCs abilities/thought process/and character trait is blamed/awarded to his past life with minimal explanation. Oh he did such an such, well as a previous heavenly demon MC was able to do it. Iv just read advent of an arch mage where it also has a similar problem but it credits mcs 'past life' experience to not his ability but his talent/growth speed and it shows the actual process of his development of magic. Tldr these alot of things wrong with the novels writing style, if given to a competent editor a quick rewrite could yeild a 50 extra chapters of content and be a bit more engaging. Would recommend reading but some parts are a bit tedious.
