The Sloth - Reviews

"Don't move," the man ordered.

Allied Generals:

"Hi everyone!" she said with an enthusiastic Assenian accent "Command's brought us some new toys! I'm Sergeant Lynette Arnaud and I'll have the pleasure of briefing you all on your new toys!"

"But, I'm her husband!" Sandali siyang natigilan nang mapagtanto ang lumabas sa kanyang bibig dahil sa galit. "E-ex husband I should say..." Medyo binabaan niya ang boses sa pagbabawing iyon.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

And all that glitters is gold

First of all, I want to give a round of applause to such great work?? I love how the female lead was portrayed...really helpful on my own work

Important Announcement!This book had a few months of preparation, and has taken me a lot of time to write, mostly due to editing and rewriting with assistance. I had a decent idea, but I ruined it. Instead of focusing on quality, I decided to chase the daily word count, and it has resulted in this book, I am still proud of it, but I will be lying if I said I lived up to the potential of this book. I have completed Volume 1, and I have even written plans and a few chapters for Volume 2, but to be honest, there will be many more mistakes made, I tried to do too many things, while not focusing on what is truly important. I'm sorry. And thank you for those who stuck with me despite the flaws in the book, I will be posting another book on this platform, but as for Pretending to Be God, it is over, for now at least. I will be open to questions if there are any. And once again, thank you.

This book lacks some realism like the MC’s last life she was betrayed by someone close to her and almost died but when she got a second chance she was so trusting to people she met for a few hours? Usually their is trauma from being betrayed by someone you trust! Also when the team of four people were training they never met a monster at all? How is that realistic when the whole city is supposed to be crowded with them? Also they explain the training again the second time like they never did it the day before? Like she had to personally teach them again but shouldn’t they know from what they previously trained in? It just seems so unreal and fantasy with some plot holes here and there. And the characters don’t seem all that fleshed out and is just there to be in that role without any extra feelings! I also didn’t see MC train much because she was helping them so how is she going to improve when she is still in her younger body without any of her reflexes, muscle memory, or even instincts? I mean they trained for a whole week and ran for an hour to the designated area for training but never met a monster does that make sense?

Fantasic story so far, I saw an ad for it on another website, and decided to come take a look. The story and world building to the story is fantastic and sucked me right in. Every time there was a hole in the story, it was explained and elaborated on shortly after. I look forward to reading more!

The whole book is strange to me. Many things are repeated, which I think is not a coincidence. There are plenty of logical errors. The fights are very boring and easily confuse you. The world building is good and so is the power system. I like the overpowered main character. But basically because there are too many  the book is flawed and the author shamelessly dares to ask for money for it, it is completely unreadable to me.