New Version here: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/12205/the-slime-and-the-bounded-starsails
He was just another depressed adolescent in the modern day, with no direction or goals. He never felt comfortable with his experience in his so-called 'life' and after his death found himself in a New World…reborn as a slime. In this mysterious New World with three moons, three nations, and three races, there was a threat lurking just under the surface.
Please feel free to leave comments and feedback at any point in the story. Criticism is welcome and I'm receptive to it. This kind of interaction with my audience helps a lot with my motivation to write at the moment.
5-6-17 Update
Okay, I was in over my head. There was no way I could end a draft I knew wasn't going how I wanted. So, I'm going to shift this 'version 2' of my novel to 'version 3.' I will, therefore, re-post newly edited chapters into a separate new 'story.' Since I want to be judged for the version of the story I'm working on, I'll create a new 'story' so all stats will reset.
TOTAL VIEWS :35,696AVERAGE VIEWS :1,623FOLLOWERS :152FAVORITES :13RATINGS :22PAGES :243
These were the stats as the time I'm writing this. In my new draft, I won't try anything fancy because it'll usually blow up in my face. The new version will be in chronological order so there will be less jumping around the place (sorry to those who were annoyed by that aspect). I'll be changing and adding things here and there but as I said, the ending of Book 1 will not change. Thank you all for reading and following me through this.
4-11-17 Update
I plan to do a major plot point revision in a few of the earlier chapters. These re-writes should have no impact to the Book I ending and they should clarify a few things I only alluded to before. More specifically, the time-skip between the first and second arc of the story and Elliot's relation to Reinold and Yuli. I plan to finish the book first, then do the revisions so I don't leave you guys in a perpetual cliff-hanger. Sorry about not maintaining my schedule. Real life stuffs.
3-20-17 Update
You guys can expect at least one announcement a month from me. Just a check-in from me to give you guys an idea of what's going on without looking into the chapters. I plan to conclude 'Book I' by the end of next month so I'll be on a weekly update schedule now. No promises though.
