The Second Marriage with CEO - Reviews

has this story been a abandoned?

Just a Spade casually dropping by and leaving a review.This started out pretty average but gradually got better. I wouldn't mind if it continued♠️?

As in my previous comment I emphasize that it is rushing the story and not doing real world building, I will add that there is a huge problem with the interaction of the characters and the plot in general, where did they meet? When? How did they meet? How was the process of finding a publisher? When did the MC start acting classes? How did he meet his teacher, being that he's a renowned former actor? How was the audition for the role in the theater play and when did it happen?Honestly, I don't want to sound condescending but it is necessary that you as an author acquire the mentality of asking questions in order to be able to flesh out the plot, because in the current picture it seems that the character just gets the things he wants without any difficulty, besides, it sucks that you put things in that should be implied, such as the character's lack of general inexperience in what is due to things like business, among other things. It takes time to improve, take your time and start acquiring a more inquisitive mindset and this will greatly improve your writing.

That's a good story and i really like it. You've probably readed Jay Aslan cus that's exaclty the same start. A MC in coma for years, a lovely rich family and i'm not here to judge you. I've thinked to make the same start to my novel but i prefere to make something unique. If you want a author's tip, i really recomend you to do a synopsis and a cape for your book. You can look at mine and see the diference. We have the same number of chapters and the same potential soo, let's grow togheter!(My novel is "Zhanye Black - To be a superstar".)

The full synopsis is here guys:At the center of the world, the King of Gods Zeus stands atop Mount Olympus. With a spear of lightning in hand, he overlooks the world with a laugh as all before him the gods gather like trees in a forest.In the north, Odin sits upon a high throne within his halls of silver, the heavenly spear Gungnir in his grasp. Looking down, boundless winds and snow crosses his view.Down south, Amon steers his sun boat along the River Nile. Before his eyes lays the Aegean Sea and himself upon a mountain of bones.And in Mesopotamia Marduk, King of Kings, gazes upon the Western Lands. Gilgamesh, his hero king, brings to Greece his oracle. As far as the eye can see, warships dot the waters.Finally, at Plato Academy, a youngster named Suye walks up a mountain to seek its summit.

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I am currently at chapter 851, the story so far has decent world build character growth (MC) and some kingdom building elements. The story is pretty basic, however it is still entertaining and and enjoyable read. If you like the concept of gu and evolution of abilities, you should give it a read. There is only one major translation issue, that come with the demon clans. There are two different clans but they are called the same thing so it’s impossible to know which is being referenced.  Once I a while there is some misgendering but that doesn’t really happen that often. I would say give this a try, it might be your cup of tea.

t"Elle," nakangiting sabi nito, that's her popular name since college.

"You may leave," Zeno said to the man.

He said we'd have the strength.

Right now though, it seems yesterday's events had aged her a bit, making her eyes look tired and defeated. She hated it. She'd never felt uglier.