Hello, I am Lonelythree and this is the first time I am reviewing my book and want to tell you something.First, this book would follow a mixed pov writing style with a majority in the First person and some parts third person.Secondly, this novel would follow a mix of fantasy, lore, secret groups, evil religion, evil gods, the Academy, and Mc having its followers so you can expect a great number of things.The pacing would be a bit slow and world-building would be crafted phase by phase so that there isn't much info dump.This is my first novel with a serious story with a lot of things going so I might make mistakes but do suggest corrections and remind me of plot holes.Before you form your opinion, I would ask you to read the first 20-30 chapters before disliking or commenting on it.Constructive criticism is accepted but doesn't just give 1-star with no feedback and filled with symbols. Give 1 star but have a say about what you disliked and what can be improved.
