The Raven and the Snake - Reviews

The Raven and the Snake
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and suddenly duike came out!!
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Yep, I'm dead.
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Tapi sekarang, budak itu telah melampaui tuannya!.

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You opened up your heart.
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Finny: I thought things would go faster if I used extra strength weed-killer on the garden.
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"Ehei.. pipimu memerah. Benar kau sudah menyukaiku?" Sehun mendekatkan wajahnya dengan wajah Yoona. Membuat Yoona semakin merasa malu dan mendadak menjadi gugup.
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-Yes,I have. Odin, Zeus, Hercules, Thor, Set, Horus...
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Supir-nenek kok baik banget kenapa kacang mete nya gak di makan sendiri aja nek,,
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Only shooting stars break the mold
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"No…"
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I can't get past the grammer issues and repetitive sentences. Multiple paragraphs in the same chapter contradict themselves. The story may have had potential, but I can't continue this to find out.

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