This story brought back several memories for me, it reminds me of the time when I followed the author in the first hundred chapters there in S. H., where we could curse the bad characters, cry together about the "flags" of s. and play with the author. It was definitely a good part of my adolescence, but I got past reading r18+ novels and stopped reading.
I wouldn't say it's the best story, in many parts it has predictable writing, but it was definitely nostalgic to see it here again.