The Lost Dreams - Reviews

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Nice...I  really have to continue reading it...

I guess it doesn't matter now.

"What are you doing?"

I took my new spear to an empty park and practiced a few thrust and I heard a new 'ping' sound.

"Don't joke at a time like this mich..."

Said the sect leader in a great voice.

It would be my sin, to doubt your love,

"You must be joking, what do I have to prepare when fighting someone like you?"

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I just realized I haven't done a review of the novel yet, so here it is. So far the story has been focusing on cultivation and getting stronger, which I do like, and he doesn't pull these random comebacks out of his a*s and feels a little more realistic than cultivation novels nowadays.The writing quality is good. 5/5 Chapter updates have been consistent; we are currently getting 2 a day (wish we got more lol). Now let's move on to the MC's character. From what I have seen, he is cold, calculating, greedy, isn't a b*tch, and is very ruthless and unforgiving over the smallest things. Let me give an example. After he finished the sect trial to join the sect, he was talking to the sect elders (I think they were I don't remember) on a mountain, and they said, Let's go test your talent, so they hopped on their flying swords and left the MC on the mountain instead of taking him with them. So now the MC has to climb down the cliff and travel through a forest with a bunch of beasts, and on the way, the MC was like, "Just you wait until I grow strong enough... I will make sure the three of you suffer a fate worse than death." Now let's talk about the romance While I have been told by the author that there will be a harem, we haven't seen much of it because at the moment MC is in the mindset that he can't form any sort of romantic relationship because he needs to get stronger and doesn't have time to spend on romance. Oh, and the author has said that there will be no yuri, just a quick FYI.Now, as for world-building, so far it's pretty good. I won't go into much detail but just trust me on this. All in all, I would recommend

So far, very intriguing story, very gripping and leaving readers for more! Please continue to write! The flow is ultra smooth and the linguistic-wise, it's well-written!