The Light Outside - Reviews

Although Gods of War technically drew their strength from the belief of their followers, they were still fundamentally different from other Gods. To begin with, Gods of War were mainly worshiped in times of conflict and violence. With no battle lasting forever, Gods of War relied on another source of divinity to sustain themselves.

From the time of his departure from the Sitri manor to the present instance, three hours had already passed. It was more than enough time for Serafall to have readied all her preparations regarding the wedding. As such, Shirou was certain that his absence was already known to a select few.

"I'm so sorry guys, my alarm clock decided to die out on me and I woke up late." I tearly said as I apologize to them.

"Sigh, look Vader. The amount of resources that goes into training our workers is too much to simply kill them off. The workers union is even protesting you." he explained as he turned on a screen displaying riots and protests

"Yes I promise you." Looking at her expression once again Suijin swear to himself to protect his beautiful kitty. 'Even if I have to go trough oceans of blood! Even If have to climb mountains of corpses! Even if I have to slaughter demons and gods! Even if my flesh and limbs are ripped from my body! Even if I have to use my teeth to rip their throats! I swear to protect you! No matter what will happen to my body and mind! I swear to protect you!'

"I see, so that's why my legs seems to ache more than usual," Bai Qian nodded in understanding.

'Now Now. Just come many times you going to keep sighing.. Are you planning to break the world record for sighing 100 times every seconds... What on your mind??' I heard this honeyed feminine voice, I looked up and meet the elegant person, she had dyed red cherry bob hair  that fit the frame of her face, her lovely matured facial feature, apricot skin, black eyes, sharp nose and thin lips , her mature face that leave women in jealous, if you ever seen her high school photos, you will probably be mistaken thinking that she is an adult. (when she isnt) even with or without makeup. She wore a stylish office  suit , a beige ruffle top with black pencil skirt, wearing stylish watch and accessories. Her name is London. I was lucky to be friends with her during the interview and  the best part is, we were able to work in the same department, in the same office as her. Don't ask how. We are just lucky. By chance her office desk is directly right beside me. I sighed again.

And all that glitters is gold

Review after chapter 217.Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks.Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance?Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech.Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion.This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!

Author you did a great work. Also the cliffhangers always get me each time I wanna read more

This book is really a god given, it has so many satisfactory scenes that makes you satisfy.Good and worthy of your time.I can't stop reading and I want more.