The Lie You Told Me Back When Were Kids - Reviews

His breath wasfanning to my ear. My body got hot. Why this room so hot as hell? He moves away from my ear. "here the plan" he said. All of them listening to him,

A tiny sweat forming on his head before replying the boy (Seems like I was too obvious. What it was about? You always too immersed on  your screen and while I was reaching you, you were startled and would just turn your back facing me.) another smile forming on Joe's face.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

Rose was the one speaking… she felt confused when an unknown voice spoke in her mind…

I have read these 15 chapters but I don't find it that Interesting so add so spice

It seems very interesting!Looking for more chapters to come.In my opinion it is a really good start and such type of Fan-Fiction wasn't made till now!

interesting character and plot, beautiful description flow of text.

if wincest then I shall comesup